Blog Entry: Critique two other proposals from two other students. Give constructive feedback.
Dahni Yusuf: Passing out flyers at the local mosque and collecting donations
constructive feedback: I think this is a great idea, because she is actively and specifically targeting her community members resulting in a direct difference being made. The only type of improvement to be made would be to maybe try and get other members from other mosques to sread flyers to, in order to capture a larger audience.
Bereket Zeru: Making a powerpoint
constructive feedback: While this is a great idea to include all the information, I think that there should be another aspect which is more interactive with the audience. People easily get bored from just watching presentations, so there needs to be an element that keeps them awake and interested.
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